Some time was found today, so I finished editing Book 1! Huzzah!
In general I think it’s pretty good—there’s a big scene I think needs to be slowed down and given more importance, but the whole is all right.
Some time was found today, so I finished editing Book 1! Huzzah!
In general I think it’s pretty good—there’s a big scene I think needs to be slowed down and given more importance, but the whole is all right.